How to UPGRADE your character designs

This is a character design critique/attempted roast for @chashuu0! I was specifically asked for help with in adding detail to the character. There are many different solutions to the same problem, so I just want to showcase my approach to it. I hope these tips and tricks will help you improve your concept art. 00:00 Intro 00:32 Start Critique 01:11 Posing 03:01 Why add detail? 03:39 Finding Reference 06:06 Adding Accessories 06:41 Balancing Detail Distribution 08:06 Start Detailed Sketch 09:08 Big, Medium, Small 10:44 Drawing shoes 11:55 Not all Character Design has to tell a story 12:33 Cel shading 13:01 Coloring Shadows 14:07 Finished Streamed on Editor @chashuu0 BGM 2:23 AM by Sharou しゃろう 日曜の午後 by KK