“helpless and left for dead...“

Please rate and comment. I’m thinking about going farther with this idea but I’m not sure how it’s gonna all play out.. I was trying to go for a simple video but there are parts that irritate me and there are parts that I love. Kinda confusing, I know but I tried! storyline: -Mufasa sends hyenas to kill his son because he thinks he is an unworthy heir. -Simba gets away by jumping off the cliff and ends up in the desert. -He wanders for days before collapsing, the vultures following his every step. -Meanwhile Mufasa breaks the news to the pride, the hyenas tell him that Simba got away and he is displeased. -Scar comes to the rescue and bats away the vultures. -He tells Simba about Mufasa’s lies of loving him and promises to take care of him. -Holding Simba reminds him of Kovu, his son. -Flashback time! -Scar and his son were relaxing when Scar hears a sound. Telling his son to be quiet he sneaks off and attacks a lioness that was waiting th